rage and fill and rend in two
knife-sharp rapture tortured bliss
breaking down and tear apart
liberation, sunder walls
crisis plight and hesitant
scatter forth and trespass fierce
in victim paradise sublime
lost yet certainty defined
rage and fill and rend in two knife-sharp rapture tortured bliss breaking down and tear apart liberation, sunder walls crisis plight and hesitant scatter forth and trespass fierce in victim paradise sublime lost yet certainty defined |
Comments
Nice use of words, by the way!
But I always admire the inspiration and I'm glad you grasped it and didn't let it go before to put the words in writing! Even if you don't understand it entirely now, even if it will remain just an expression of emotions, it's a great piece of work! Maybe it will become a part or a start for something new in your writing, but even if it will stay that way, it has its own character and feelings!
I can only encourage you always to use the inspiration just as you did with this wonderful piece!
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