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rage and fill and rend in two
knife-sharp rapture tortured bliss
breaking down and tear apart
liberation, sunder walls
crisis plight and hesitant
scatter forth and trespass fierce
in victim paradise sublime
lost yet certainty defined
:iconlupus-draconis:

Author's Comments

Somewhere between midnight until 2am or so. Something gripped me and compelled me to write, though what exactly I ended up writing I am not entirely sure.

It's a strange little thing, I don't write verse like this. It's a foreign thing in my head, comprised of vague images and impressions I can't even begin to identify.

What do you all make of this?

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:iconjonnyblackmage:
It has a pretty violent feel to me. Sounds like someone trying to break up with a psychopath, an animal trying to get out of a cage, or someone being brutally murdered.

Nice use of words, by the way!
:iconiglikasilverstream:
Oh, wow! Very interesting! It was a real challenge for my English! I loved to write things like this in Bulgarian, there is a whole eternity since nothing like this came to me, actually no poetry at all, from a few years.

But I always admire the inspiration and I'm glad you grasped it and didn't let it go before to put the words in writing! Even if you don't understand it entirely now, even if it will remain just an expression of emotions, it's a great piece of work! Maybe it will become a part or a start for something new in your writing, but even if it will stay that way, it has its own character and feelings!

I can only encourage you always to use the inspiration just as you did with this wonderful piece!

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